This morning started early with feeding the animals and enjoying the foggy look of the sun through the mist. Lots to do today before I get back to working on Truth Tells, the second book of the Truth Series. Felicity, Ace, Cam and Mia are waist deep in betrayal and …
My morning began with feeding the animals. Both dogs decided to join in the fun by getting into the pasture with the girls. Donkeys are used to guard livestock from canine predators. Mine have been trained not to attack my dogs. However, I never thought of them racing around the …
Working on book 4 of the Live Oak Series, RJ and Nancy’s story, Catch the Fire. Surprising twists in this one and they are keeping me hopping. Story starts with Archer and Miranda in Chase the Fire which is now available in paperback and Kindle. Free with an Audible trial.
Woke up to a beautiful morning on the Farm, warm with a crystal blue sky. From all of us, animals and humans, we wish you the very best Christmas ever. Hope you have a wonderful day full of surprises and fun.
Avoid the use of passive verbs. They slow the story, decrease tension and they do not create definitive actions, words or responses. Ex. He became angry. Okay, you told the reader he is angry. Became is passive. Let’s show the reader instead. Much more immediate, intense and definitive. Ex. Anger …
The Elf put the finishing touches on the Christmas tree this morning. Love seeing the lights sparkling through the ornaments and garlands. The writer is proofing the audio of the first three chapters of Playing with Fire. Chapter one is great! Erin is doing a wonderful job of narrating the …
