Avoid the use of passive verbs. They slow the story, decrease tension and they do not create definitive actions, words or responses. Ex. He became angry. Okay, you told the reader he is angry. Became is passive. Let’s show the reader instead. Much more immediate, intense and definitive. Ex. Anger flashed through him in a…
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Christmas Elf & the Writer–Part 2
The Elf put the finishing touches on the Christmas tree this morning. Love seeing the lights sparkling through the ornaments and garlands. The writer is proofing the audio of the first three chapters of Playing with Fire. Chapter one is great! Erin is doing a wonderful job of narrating the story. https://laceydancer.com/product/playing-with-fire/
Christmas Elf & the Writer
Christmas is my favorite holiday. Being in the middle of Catch the Fire doesn’t mean I get a pass on my Christmas Elf tasks. Decorating is happening around here. Outdoor area is done. Will finish the inside fun tomorrow.
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